So, now that we have solved the great admissions diversity mystery, we can get started on the actual essays. Please discuss how such factors have influenced your goals and preparation for a career in medicine. Or this question from Wake Forest School of Medicine: How will you contribute to the diversity of your medical school class and to the medical community in general? Most frequently, this lamentation originates from a lack of creativity and fundamental understanding about what diversity means.
Thus, while ethno-cultural, religious, or socioeconomic backgrounds are all forms of diversity, they are by no means the only forms of diversity. Indeed, diversity is anything about you which is special and which will allow you to satisfy the objectives of diversity as described above. Have a special personal quality such as being a talented connector, or unusually high EQ? Have a very specific and innovative career path in mind e.
Worked as a personal trainer or a nutritionist? Sometimes, applicants get too caught up in the ways they are different, that they forget that being different is not an end, but a means to an end. They have to help prove that you are deserving of a seat at the med school roundtable. For example, being a chronic truant or two-time felon are certainly unique qualities and experiences for an applicant to medical school.
Will they help you get in? Almost certainly not, and for obvious reasons. Best to focus on some other topic for your medical school diversity essay. The point is simple: Are you actually the smartest person in the world? Diversity, though it may be an intangible concept or quality, still requires tangible evidence. Although it seems plausible that you would know more than others who are from affluent, non-immigrant backgrounds, you still need to prove it.
Make the connections explicit. You could do this by providing anecdotes about your communication skills with immigrant families during your time with Habitat for Humanity. Or you could explain how you used your special insights and cross-cultural communication skills in becoming a leader in La Raza. I love motivating people to better their lives. That is why I worked as a nutritionist. This is just to demonstrate a point.
Thus, if you do decide to focus on ethnic, cultural, or religious diversity, the best approach is not to hammer the adcom with how significant your minority status is. If you have a suggestion about this website or are experiencing a problem with it, or if you need to report abuse on the site, please let us know.
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More by this author Follow Sarah Tenas. I like this 0. Deciding the Future of the Earth. Fixing Humans, Saving Manatees. This article has 24 comments. Email me when someone replies. I find it funny to come back on here to read some of the comments to a paper I wrote when I was 14 or 15 to have re-edited it so that I could post it here when I was You know what does, meritocracy. Also, how are we supposed to get more diverse? All of the ways I've heard are authoritarian and racist.
I say keep it the same, its worked for generations, why struggle to change it? Diversity captures the realm of experiences in music, art, and life. I mostly enjoy off the wall bands and singers; I listen to a whole bunch of types of music. I believe this can be said both ways. If I'm sad I listen to less upbeat songs but if an upbeat song happens to come on I feel much happier. My best friends listen to songs on the radio, all modern stuff. I like their music but I do prefer slightly dated music.
I do agree with the statement. When people listen to different genres of music it opens them up to different things. I feel like people do judge based on the music people listen to. For example, I listen to Ed Sheeran, but I also listen to a Rage Against The Machine- two very different genres with two very different connotations to the music.
My parents don't filter my music. They don't care what I listen to because I'm not negatively influenced by music. I agree because listening to music can broaden your perspective. This is a brilliant piece of work and has contributed greatly to my research on these issues.
I've never read someone who has speaks such sophistry with such conviction. Your reasoning for encouraging diversity can be summed up into "They bring fresh ideas and help us to understand our differences". Before I get into how ridiculously unfounded that reasoning is, let me first tell you that the rest of your article revolves around stating quotes from various leftist "researchers" and your own opinions, neither of which are reputable sources of evidence, nor are of any value to debate.
You, understandably given the fact that your thoughts are young and malleable are confusing diversity with multiculturalism. It is fair to say that to "have new experiences", you do not need a person from another country living in the house next to you. Cultural tourism is a very successful industry, but it's actually in decline. That's because we aren't achieving multiculturalism. As a British man, straight and white; you must hate me..
Traditions are side-lined to maintain "Social cohesion" with new arrivals, patriotism is "racist" and is bigotry. So when a white man stands up for western values, he gets shouted down by his countrymen for failing to acknowledge some "privilege" he has.
The only "fresh" ideas migrants have provided are self-censorship, and self-loathing for the actions of our ancestors. The rest of these migrants have surrendered their own cultures and assimilated a distorted version of our own, and we theirs, leaving a cultural wasteland, formally called uniculturalism. That's why tourism is on the decline. Foreign nations are becoming westernised, and are losing their charm. Western nations are becoming apologist regressives, and are losing our own identity.
With immigration, they either want to integrate, and lose their cultural charm, or they dont want to, and they become marginalised lunatics telling us how horrible we are. Really opened my eyes about guns. Thank you so much! Good beta I like it. Diversity is not nonsense and the reason why Miami is not 'successful in trading' and other cultures are not bringing 'cultural enrichment' as you claimed is probably because imbecilic racists like you are not allowing this to happen because you are oppressing these individuals.
Also if they did bring 'cultural enrichment it wouldn't be accepted by the 'dwindling whites' and they would complain that the Hispanics are 'taking over their country 'etc. So either way they won't be satisfied because they racist and nothing satisfies a racist person if it isn't the other race moving out of 'their' country. Diversity is the the gradual phasing out of White people.
I got you eric and yu may be right. I would love to know where you are get most of this. I have never read so much deluded liberal nonsense.
Diversity is the essence of evolution. Right from the ancient times, it has been clearly evident that various races of the world interacted and traded with each other. Calling diversity as one of the leading survival tactics of the human race won’t be an anomaly. It opens up the mind and.
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